Pitch Narrative Feedback

For one of our tasks we were told to give a presentation on the ideas for our title sequence and out film. We were then given feedback on what went well and in what areas we needed to improve in.

Pros

• The actors we chose to play in our film were stereotypical and well thought out.
• Our choice to film using a split screen to create the effect of a CCTV camera was unique as no one else has tried it before. However it has to be carried out correctly to be effective.

Cons

• The idea behind our film was cliché and was very similar to the Paranormal Activity series of films.
• Our production company's name is "Static Films" t link in with static you may see on a TV, however the word static also means to not be moving so this may confuse our audience.